Azalea Moone – On the Clouds of Obsession

on the clouds

Author: Azalea Moone
Reviewed by: Vivian
Publisher: Storm Moon Press
Genre: M/M Contemporary Brocest
ISBN 13: 9781627570381

Rating: ★★☆☆☆ 

Summary:  Years ago, Jeremy glimpsed his brother Matt naked in the locker room. The image has stayed with him, pleasantly haunting his thoughts ever since. Now, Matt is due to be married in a week, and Jeremy knows that he is quickly approaching his last chance to reveal his secret feelings to his brother. On the night of Matt’s bachelor party, Jeremy takes a chance that could not only jeopardize his friendship with his brother, but could also doom the impending wedding.

Review:  Naughty little tale of two brothers getting it on.

Jeremy has lusted after his big brother Matt for years and one evening he gets a chance he’s only ever dreamed of…touching what he wants.

I like brocest and twincest so this story got a star from me just for that. Unfortunately, the development of the story after the initial incident was stilted and never gave any real understanding of Matt’s change of mind. The story felt like it lurched and  staggered to reach the ending it wanted whether or not the characters had earned it.

Favorite quote:

Anywhere, it could be anywhere, and I would be happy just to have him naked in my arms.


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