Review: Jaime Samms – Permanent Ink

51SUSUjBQvLAuthor: Jaime Samms
Reviewer: Shereadsalot
Publisher: Dreamspinner Press
Genre: Contemporary

Rating: ★★☆☆☆ 

Summary:

2nd Edition

Beauty is only skin deep, but some marks—and what they represent—are impossible to escape.

Eric resents his comfortable college life and the restrictions his family’s expectations put on him. Dwayne, his best friend Angel’s cousin, is a pierced and tattooed ex-con trying to rebuild his life. Eric sees only the tattoos and the way Dwayne’s upbringing have dictated his future. It takes a surprising revelation from Angel to force Eric to see past Dwayne’s defenses to the generous heart beneath and to realize it’s time for him to break free of his own instilled beliefs. The men can’t keep apart, and they gradually learn that everything they thought they knew about each other might be wrong.

Opposites attract as two men from very different backgrounds move from enemies to lovers in a story of understanding, compassion, and redemption.

Review:

The re-release of Permanent Ink by Jaime Samms is a short story that features a very quick pairing between white college basketball player Eric and black tatted/pierced ex-con Dwayne. Eric’s best friend is Dwayne’s cousin, Angel, meaning they knew of each other but never formally hung out. Eric judges Dwayne based on his outward appearance, assuming the worst. Though Dwayne doesn’t help Eric’s preconception in the beginning of the short when he brags about his ass pain from a hookup the night before. The two start on the wrong foot and it quickly turns around into a HEA.

Race is an important factor in this short. And unfortunately, so are a few stereotypes.

This is a re-release, I haven’t read the original version but I’m going to take a stab that not much changed. Though the time period could be implied as modern day, it read more like any reference to the time period was vaguely mentioned. An example, Dwayne is supposed to look like a “thug” with cornrows and beads because he came from the hood and had to wear the “thug” exterior to protect himself on the “inside”.

*sigh*

I just can’t buy the characterization as justification for writing Dwayne this way. I’m unsure if the story is supposed to be based in the UK or America, so it could help me reference the characters. Maybe that’s how the “thugs” dress and act in a different part of the world? *shrug*

I think I see what the author was going for, opposites attract insta-love romance but the beginning was rough. I didn’t like Eric. He was privileged and didn’t really come away as a better person in the end. Dwayne read more like 2-D character who had past rape added to his life to give depth?

Past rape was given as the reason for the “armor” of tattoos and ‘tough persona….why have him brag about sleeping around if he has a sexual hang up (about bottoming). There were contradicting factors – hooking up with random men to never having sex since jail.

Didn’t make the impact it tried to go for.

My second biggest gripe (after poor characterization) is if this was reedited, why not make it read more current? Angel tried to give something about race relations when he tried to give a teaching moment with Eric. But it kinda fell off to the wayside. Story is too short to try and encompass crime, rape PTSD. Not a fan of the way it was written or presented.

The one sex scene was a bust because the main characters read awkward and acted awkward to me. Example, it’d be a kiss then stall then kiss then pause…not smooth writing. Along with the vagueness in the writing.

I’ve read this author in the past. Samms’s books have a tendency to be full of angst. I don’t think the topics added to make the story…interesting (for lack of a better word) was needed.

How could the story have been better? More length, show how the two connected rather than insta-love over time. There were very tiny bits of that that just didn’t go anywhere.

Didn’t like Eric by the end – he still read like a privileged rich kid. I doubt he grew or will grow from his relationship with Dwayne. Dwayne could do so much better.

Not recommended.

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